NaPoWriMo Poem #25

Poem #25
Miro's Blue

Slashes
of paint, like notes
played, and lasting--afloat
in memory, in the ether
of thought

Comments

I have already revised this:

Miro's Blue

A slash
of paint, a note
played, and lasting--afloat
in memory, in the ether
of thought

[mary]

oooh, yes, the second one is better.
We leave on our trip Tuesday. Got me thinking:

The car
Waits for Bill and
Bill waits for Mary while
She checks twice. Did I turn off the
Coffee?

This is fun. What do we do for May?

[Paula]

You did a great NaPo, Carol. These are small gems, all.