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aisha

Carol -- this is fantastic as is!
poetic--and I wish I were there-- summer coming, huh?

Shisa

Eliot Prufrock

The sense of created versus create, functional versus the cool aesthetic works well as is. Sort of like driving along the Bruce shoreline and passing a Tim Horton's and then an inukchuk.

Eliot.

Paula

yes, Carol, I wouldn't change much. These are not notes for a poem, they are the poem. Well done, Carol.

Rangerteper

Yeah, what they said. I think this needs to go in the OTHER blog too...

Carol

Hey you guys!

Thanks for the kind words. I'm heading back to the Keys this weekend, working on our house, and working on a poem, I hope. That place inspires me.

Carol

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