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I have already revised this:

Miro's Blue

A slash
of paint, a note
played, and lasting--afloat
in memory, in the ether
of thought

mary

oooh, yes, the second one is better.
We leave on our trip Tuesday. Got me thinking:

The car
Waits for Bill and
Bill waits for Mary while
She checks twice. Did I turn off the
Coffee?

This is fun. What do we do for May?

Paula

You did a great NaPo, Carol. These are small gems, all.

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